Microfiction #1

11/19/2014

The Umbrella Conundrum

Audra secured her bootstraps around her waist and opened the door. Outside, the Sprite hummed eagerly. Water poured from the black shelf of cloud above the city ruins to the sea below. Fastening the shedcape around her, she took to the sky.

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Tina link

11/19/2014 11:21:35 am

What a vivid picture! I wanted to go with her.

Nate link

11/19/2014 12:15:23 pm

Wow! Being able to stop the rain as a superpower. I could use that now, provided it would mean I could also stop the snow.

KymmInBarcelona link

11/19/2014 08:07:56 pm

Love the outfit! Taking it head on - nice!

Silverleaf

11/19/2014 09:17:04 pm

What a great twist! This line is particularly lovely: "the black shelf of cloud above the city ruins to the sea below."

jen link

11/19/2014 11:35:06 pm

And now I want to read more. :) Nicely done!

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