LAURA LEE LUCAS

Promises

9/23/2015

 
“Today’s the day.” Lili straddled Kevin, pinning his arms down. “Seven years tonight.”
“I’m sorry, okay?! I can’t bring her back!”
“You can.” With the blood from his wound, Lili drew the circle around them both, chanting quietly.
Kevin started to cry.






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Genna Claire link
9/24/2015 06:36:17 am

Wow. This took a dark turn so quickly! I was caught off guard! Nicely done.

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Laura
9/24/2015 10:58:07 am

Thank you!

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Christine link
9/24/2015 09:36:38 am

A tiny little supernatural horror story! Great sense of [chilling] mood here. Nicely done.

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Laura
9/24/2015 10:58:37 am

Thanks, Christine!

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Anna link
9/24/2015 05:06:31 pm

Wow, that escalated quickly! Very cleverly written! Love it :)

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