Love it and want more! Good writing.
*shivers* Shades of Carrie... yikes
Thanks! Carrie is a favorite of mine.
What a way to grab your audience by the throat!
A gripping tale indeed
Thank you very much!
something sinister under the drapes . shudder.
I had a lot of fun writing this - it is such a pleasure to put menace into the mundane. For me, scary + drapes = a good day's work.
Ooh! What is it?!
Damn. Wonderfully ominous.
Thank you! :-)
Ooh, so suspenseful. I really want to know what it was that she pulled out!
I like to leave the reader wondering what I didn't say...
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