Not sure what it says about me that I laughed... Nicely (or maybe not so nicely?) done!
I laughed too, so it's all good. Thank you!
Perfect title! I also like Marcy's evasive response in the final line.
Thank you! Doritos: Treasure or Torture? is one of the great questions of life, in my opinion.
Clever, clever, perfectly done. I love the line where they shift in their chairs.
I'm with Jennifer - love them both shifting in their chairs.
Great title, too.
Thanks Kym! I love a title that can do a little extra work toward the story.
Confession...I had to read through this twice. But WOW, when I got it...brilliant!!!! LOVE this!! ♥
Thanks Kathy! :-)
Loved this! Great title, great story, great response to the question. You did everything perfectly.
Thank you, Christine!
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